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I like the way you chunked up the space. It is still a bit raw so it’s hard to give a lot of good feedback. I suggest making the illustrations really engaging to catch attention to the poster. I am excited to see what you do.
Anthony's Critique
I am attempting to break the space into two areas. One to explain the increase in airmail at SLC Int'l Airport, and the other to explain how business owners are taking advantage of airmail to improve business. The illustrations should engage the viewer and help to push the theme of shipping. They should also make it so the viewer can soak up the information in a short period of time.
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